You have achieved a match on action and shot reverse shot. However you do break the 180 degree rule. You have filmed from both sides of the line. A basic error.
I am afraid that your work reflects what happens when you plan badly and do not work well together as a group. There are problems with lighting and white balance as well. Some of your framing and composition are also very poor (look at how much of the back of the head we see and the tiny sliver of face of the other character. LS s really should have the top and bottom of character in frame.
You will need to do this again and show that you can observe the 180 degree rule. If you aspire to a good grade in the actual coursework, then you will have to show a major improvement. Level 2
overall guys, your blog is very under developed. You will need far greater detail for the thriller work. there is little here on either the filming or editing experience - little reflection really. You have not had the greatest of starts as a group - you will need to be much better organised for the actual coursework and your blog needs to be far more developed.
You have achieved a match on action and shot reverse shot. However you do break the 180 degree rule. You have filmed from both sides of the line. A basic error.
ReplyDeleteI am afraid that your work reflects what happens when you plan badly and do not work well together as a group. There are problems with lighting and white balance as well. Some of your framing and composition are also very poor (look at how much of the back of the head we see and the tiny sliver of face of the other character. LS s really should have the top and bottom of character in frame.
You will need to do this again and show that you can observe the 180 degree rule. If you aspire to a good grade in the actual coursework, then you will have to show a major improvement. Level 2
overall guys, your blog is very under developed. You will need far greater detail for the thriller work. there is little here on either the filming or editing experience - little reflection really. You have not had the greatest of starts as a group - you will need to be much better organised for the actual coursework and your blog needs to be far more developed.
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